Finding peace in dark silence
As the shadows
Tiptoe inside my dreams
To shame my thoughts
Inspiration to my heart…
Pure innocence belonging to
A call of my soul
When the ego becomes tired
Of dancing to daylight
Visions of obligation…
Let me embrace this silence
Be lost in the tranquil respite
Swaying in my mind
To the lullabies
Of blissful reticence …
10 comments on Silence Of The Soul
I kid you not Barbara…I’ve done courses covering most genres of writing, poetry, acting, radio,adverts, etc and talked to some ‘established’ poets . YOU! girl have that special something I can only attribute to as ‘inscriptions/heaven sent’ renderings from the heart! And you paint with your SOUL. You belong back in Dorothea Mackellar days when things were gentler, simpler, when respect and thoughtfulness didn’t have a hidden price tag of ‘obligation’ to “write what we think you should…” ‘Established poets’ everywhere, if you feel a ‘twinge’ between verses and compilation…and inspirational ‘thought management’ it starts with a capital B…ends in a.Just my humble opinion…I reckon God’s leaning on her shoulder…
I can hardly come near riginal’s eloquence so I will simply say that we are on similar journeys
I am so afraid to touch the silence of your soul because I see in that complete serenity…Your thoughts are like moon beam kissing the waves of the ocean…From the tranquillity of your thoughts you composed a silence…In this composition I certainly wish to immerse to gain insight of the life…You are absolute in line with what you are…A healer, by nature you are…Keep it up Barb…
Uttam- your words are perfect
Mi Amiga, I just LOVE this (I love all your poetry). Riginal has it quite right: that you, Barbara, DO “have that special something”, that something I see as “Gift!”
Uttam, too, expresses perfection when he says that he “afraid to touch the silence of your soul”. It took me a moment to read again and think on it, but I finally understood just what he meant. 🙂
Big virtual hugs to you…
Riginal I must sincerely thank you for your beautiful comment…it is very humbling to me…I simply write what my heart and soul is telling me. I find great freedom in expressing myself through poetry and writing. It is always so wonderful when someone is touched by something u write…many thanks my friend.
I agree Melanie, I know we are on a similar journey and you are a kindred soul to me….thank you so much…
Uttam, you sometimes take my breath away with the beauty of your thoughts. You are so special to my soul and I know you so well. If anyone does knows me, it is you….thank you…you made this lady smile….:-)
Virginia what do I say to your beautiful words…you bless me with such understanding and love. You too are a sacred soul…and i relate so well to your heart….Thank you my friend.
Barbara, I am back just so you know I am smiling. Thank you!!
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